I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
tena koe Malachi he tino pai to pakiwaituhi he tino pai nga kanikani i mahi koe mo Micheal jackson. he aha tetahi mea uouwa o to pakiwaituhi.ka pai Malachi
Tēnā koe Malachi, nāu te pakiwaituhi tuatahi kua kitea e au. Taku mīharo ki te whakaatu i tāu mahi ki te akomanga. E hia te roa ki te hanga i tēnei momo?
Kia ora ko Makaore tōku ingoa, nō Te Korowai Whakamana ahau. He pai ki a au tō mahi ata Kūkara. He hokinga mahara ki te wā nāku hoki tēnei mahi i mahi. Nā, mēnā ka taea e koe te tāpiri atu tētahi wāhanga anō, he aha tēnā? Ngā mhi anō Nā Matua Makaore
Kia ora ko Tohu Ariki tōku ingoa, nō Te Korowai Whakamana ahau. He rawe ki a au tēnei mea te ata kukara.Nāu anō au i ako ki te hanga ata kukara Tena Koe Na Tohu Ariki
He pai ki a au tō…. Whakarorangatira mo te whakaro mo te tangata rongo nui ko MJ. Kaua e wareware ki te … whakamahi i to wa, Na te mea ka makaraone koe. Hoki ana aku mahara ki … nga ra i te kanikani matou ki MJ me old school pai aua ra no reira kia kaha koe.
Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments. Positive - something I have done well. Thoughtful - a sentence or more that lets me know you that you read/watched or listened to what I had to say.
tena koe Malachi he tino pai to pakiwaituhi he tino pai nga kanikani i mahi koe mo Micheal jackson. he aha tetahi mea uouwa o to pakiwaituhi.ka pai Malachi
ReplyDeleteko te me uaua ki ahau ko te ko te kanikani mo Michael Jackson.
DeleteTēnā koe Malachi, nāu te pakiwaituhi tuatahi kua kitea e au. Taku mīharo ki te whakaatu i tāu mahi ki te akomanga. E hia te roa ki te hanga i tēnei momo?
ReplyDelete1.tera pea ka taea au.
Delete2. tera pea e 3 rangi
Kiora Malachi ko Paretekohuru toku ingoa
ReplyDeleteHe tino hatekihi tenei pakiwaituhi # Rawe haere tonu me ou mahi
ki ora ko Raukura tōku ingoa. he pai ki a au te wāhanga i te moon walk ia.
ReplyDeleteKia ora ko Makaore tōku ingoa, nō Te Korowai Whakamana ahau. He pai ki a au tō mahi ata Kūkara. He hokinga mahara ki te wā nāku hoki tēnei mahi i mahi. Nā, mēnā ka taea e koe te tāpiri atu tētahi wāhanga anō, he aha tēnā?
ReplyDeleteNgā mhi anō
Nā Matua Makaore
Kia ora ko Tohu Ariki tōku ingoa, nō Te Korowai Whakamana ahau. He rawe ki a au tēnei mea te ata kukara.Nāu anō au i ako ki te hanga ata kukara
ReplyDeleteTena Koe
Na Tohu Ariki
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ReplyDeleteHe pai ki a au tō…. Whakarorangatira mo te whakaro mo te tangata rongo nui ko MJ.
ReplyDeleteKaua e wareware ki te … whakamahi i to wa, Na te mea ka makaraone koe.
Hoki ana aku mahara ki … nga ra i te kanikani matou ki MJ me old school pai aua ra no reira kia kaha koe.
Na Kyrie 11 ki Kyrie 2